Nice bundle ^_^
Lets see, Tank Men, Halo, Portal, Half Life 2, 9/11 Conspiracy, and Mass Effect in one package eh? Quite a fine job you did there. (I might've missed a few) ...
Any-who, great job.
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Nice bundle ^_^
Lets see, Tank Men, Halo, Portal, Half Life 2, 9/11 Conspiracy, and Mass Effect in one package eh? Quite a fine job you did there. (I might've missed a few) ...
Any-who, great job.
10 for style/animation/art
0 for length! ... :'( i would love to see like a full movie dude. You've got great talent. Just spend more time with it! :)
I liked it until ...
I liked it right up until the point I met a ghost samurai ... Completely overpowered and almost impossible to kill. They would use that shadow bolt move that would stack and do 40 damage each turn, and when you're an assassin thats about 1/3 of your health. Also they had that ice sword move that stunned you so they could setup the shadow bolt move. And finally! You get them down to 50 health and they heal back up to half ... Just ridiculously imbalanced. I was level 5 and I couldn't even defeat a level 3 ghost samurai .
Equalization
The organ sounds nice. I really like the melody throughout the song as well. It sounds very dark and mysterious, good for horror, which is what I'm assuming the flash comic is, considering the title. It sounds like a good start to me, but it really needs a lot of equalization. The cymbals could use some reverb, and pan the instruments around a bit to give it some space. Not bad though :)
Thanks for the review. That's very good advice. I was wondering though if you may show me how to pan instruments. I use Fruity Loops and its a hard slope to climb as far as learning all the technicalities. If you can just email me back. Thanks again! ^ ^- Ji
I like it
I like the feel of this. The orchestral sound is nice on top of hip hop. I think the melody gets a wee bit silly though. Needs more structure and solidity. It feels like it goes all over the place. In the beginning it's really nice, and then it gets out of key or something, and throughout the rest of the song just kind of bounces around. I would try to keep a pattern to it at least, and not get too crazy. And change up the beat a little, also equalize the kick and the crash cymbals need some reverb.
Lots of potential here, but just need some equalization. And the scream in the beginning is a wee bit silly ;) haha.
yeah with this song, I tried to be more "horror"/angry in this, thanks for listenin.
Not bad
I like the synths you chose, they fit nicely together. The piano kind of sticks out like a sore thumb, and sounds pretty dull. The drums kind of hide in the back too. With some equalizing, this could be a pretty sweet loop :)
yup thats what im working on. im working on getting better at it.
alright i already updated it. thanks for your review!
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