7/10
:: Pros ::
Beautiful melody.
Nice clean lead instruments.
Great variation of the main melody throughout the song.
:: Cons ::
Not enough bass. (if there was any, I didn't hear any...)
Kick sample was boring, sounded like default fruity loops.
Kick/bass too quiet.
You really want to drive that kick, make it the center of the track. I also didn't hear any bass which is odd in a trance track. Pump it up foo! The melody throughout the song was quite beautiful, and very clean sounding. Good job on the melody and all. You need to work on your structure a bit though. Listeners need to feel the energy build up, and then breakdown and build back up into a climax. A lot of energy comes from that 4 step kick which I didn't find here. Also an offbeat bass to go with the melody would've been awesome. I liked the melody but it felt like we were going the same speed the whole song. You gotta build and break and then climax ... One of the sweetests melodies I have ever heard though.
Good luck, and decent song man :)
Have a nice day :)
7/10
4/5