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lol np i'm freakin tired too xD
I haven't heard the original! :S
I haven't heard it so I can't review it that well because I don't have anything to compare it to. :D
Sounds pretty good though...And it has that Da Tweekaz scoring going on that they use in their melodies, you can sort of tell is their style. Its awesome though. Pretty sweet kick also.
Wooo :)
I like the slow build of the intro. :)
Want a fuller version though :P
IDK! :D
Not much to review here >_> ..
Good.
Pretty good
Needs mega EQ though dude :S
Drowns out the lead and theres a lot of distortion and fuzz.
Melody isn't perfect but then again I don't know if you were trying to do the exact melody
Sounds pretty good but really needs EQ
Good :D
Almost sounds like Ska-style lololol... The snare in the beginning is a little bit muffled in my opinion, but i like those snappy snares :D
Cool happy melody :)
Kick was good yez :D
W00T FOR PUNCHAY KICKZ! :DDDD
A little bit of the glitch element?
I'm guessing you used that nice little VST that I sent you eh? :D ..
hahah :)
Heck yea man, the thing is picky as hell as to how it wants to work, but im starting to make it my bitch like everything else XD
Thanks a lot for sending it my way, the thing is super fun XD
Good :)
Amazing melody. Deserves a record label >_>
But the track in general is a bit distorted <_< .
:D
Work on your mixing.
Your kick should be the most prominent thing. No definite structure besides the breakdown at 1:07 ... Keep the listener interested ... Needs more effects, more percussion, and more structure.
I actually just didn't wan't to use too much effects and percussion to keep out the melody.
6/10
Snare was a bit too loud. Got repetitive very quickly. Needs more cymbals. Ride and crash, etc. Got interesting at 1:00 or so at the breakdown and picked back up nicely. But still gets kind of repetitive. There is not much melody, its just up down , down up ... Bass sounds nice though. I'd change that lead to a synth and make a sweet melody on top of that bass line.
will do. thanks for the feedback. valuable stuff! I'll keep trying. As i say, it's not quite finished yet
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