Nice
Not too shabby there 'ol chap! :) ...
I wasn't too fond of the piano that came in around 0:50, because some bits didn't sound very mellifluous. At 1:47 it really starts to pick up nicely..
Overall nice job! :)
Nice
Not too shabby there 'ol chap! :) ...
I wasn't too fond of the piano that came in around 0:50, because some bits didn't sound very mellifluous. At 1:47 it really starts to pick up nicely..
Overall nice job! :)
Yeah...I am planning on making this longer with the very nice area (1:47) as the specific center of attention...hopefully I can do a good job o.o.
Thanks for the review and the catch at 00:50 I will see what I can do ^^;,
-AJ-
Good :)
Sounds nice. Bit of breaktrance/freeform. I like! :)
Not bad for a first!
This is probably the best song i've heard that has claimed to be a first. I don't really see it as techno to be honest though. It sounds more breakbeat/trance to me. Like break trance :P ... But it is still really good.
Incredible for a first job. The piano seemed a bit random but still good.
Review one of my tracks if you get a chance! :)
Phasers ftw
Those phasers kicked butt :O
Real good. Sounded off beat at some points but overall good
Cheers for the review, The off beat may be a side effect of some of the effects i used on the drums a little tweaking on the effects on the drums should clear this up, ill do this as part of an update to this loop i have planned. This will involve putting some more bass in those kicks too !
Needs solid structure
Needs some solid structural changes. Build ups and breakdowns would be nice :) ...
Also that first instrument is loud and the kick is a bit quiet.
Not a bad track. Some mixing needs to be done though
Very naais
Wow, beautiful intro.
I really love how the intro just built up so well. Beautiful percussion. The mixing is really good! :) ..
I like this song a lot! :)
5/5 , 9/10
Not incredibly bad.
Work on your structure this would be nice loop..
I think if you took out that wahwahwahwahwahwahwahwahwah it would sound better. Its a bit loud.
Keep on practicing dude! :) And get ahold of some new samples and VSTs like z3ta+ or Nexus
Nice! :)
The melody and build up and transitions and pads are all nice. The one thing I really wanted to feel more was the bass! I think that really would've driven this track with some powerful energy. And maybe some background effects in there somewhere...
I'd say up the ante on the bass! :)
Nice warm pad in the beginning.
Sounds like a decent practice session. This track sounds nice and clean cut. I think the kick should a bit more prominent, or maybe it was just too blurred or reverbed something. Everything was really good though :)...
Good job
9/10
4/5
Thanks. I like my music clean, never cluttered or messy. Structure is imperitive! Thanks for the review buddy!
Fun! :)
I enjoyed this song.
It was quite fun to listen to :) ...
Quite good. It sorta sounds like filtered the whole time like old adam's family style that sort of gives it that extra halloweeny spooky feel to it.
Good job! :)
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